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16 June 2009 @ 09:30 pm
085 Resistance is Futile  
Title: Darkness Overwhelming
Fandom: Mystic Force
Pairing: N/A
Rating: 15
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary/Warnings: Somewhere, all wishes come true.
Author's notes: My table is here.

085 Resistance is futile

Things very quickly got worse.

The Silver Guardians were outside the forcefield, ready and waiting with supplies. True to her word, however, Necrolai kept the field firmly in place. Food and water supplies became low, and then lower, and then reached starvation levels.

With nothing to lose, the townspeople became more and more violent. The forcefield was always under attack somewhere; no one got through, but that didn’t stop them. The squads of Hydiacs grew larger as they began to be attacked. Even Leelee was attacked once—and only once. In retaliation Necrolai razed three blocks around the area where it happened.

Koragg stalked the town, stopping fights when he saw them, protecting his Hydiacs and the townspeople alike. He never spoke, only to order people to stop fighting, only to shout the Hydiacs back into formation.

Leelee swanned around as always, followed by her adoring fans. Even they looked thinner, now, and there were fewer of them. This didn’t seem to worry her at all.

Necrolai watched and laughed as the town fell apart. After a while even the attempts at resistance stopped; people realised it was futile and gave up.

The teens kept their heads down and hid.
angel_negra on December 6th, 2009 08:37 pm (UTC)
That is a very effective scene on how to break a town's spirit. You get so much across in so few words.
Acting my shoe sizewild_force71 on December 6th, 2009 08:39 pm (UTC)
Re: Damn...
Thank you! I liked my tiny interludes.
angel_negra on December 6th, 2009 09:09 pm (UTC)
Re: Damn...
I like them too. They really drive the reality of the world home without going into over the top dramatics. Just clean and simple and amazing.